What Was That?
Today as I was walking
through the wheat field
I heard a sweet sound
that to me appealed
When I turned around
looking just to see
where it came from
guess what startled me
Right behind me stood
 an angel so grand
strumming the golden harpÂ
held in her hand
What beautiful sweet music
that it was she play
made me want to hum
as I dance and sway
‘Twas a glorious time
that we had there
in her angelic sounds
I was allowed to share
When the time came
to say our good-byes
I didn’t want to leave
which made me realize
If this is something like
what heaven must be
I want to go there
for my eternity!
Teresa Marie  8/17/11
Short Story Slam Week 8
Posted on August 17, 2011, in Poems, Short Story Slam and tagged Angel, Angelic Music, Christianity, faith, Heaven, Heavenly Sounds, peace, Poetry, Story Time With Bluebell Raccoon. Bookmark the permalink. 22 Comments.
That is so beautiful!
Blessings
Thanks! I liked the prompt this week and this poem came to me rather quickly when I saw it
Blessings to you too.
I’d like to go there to one day…..such vivid images you have captured…
Chimnese, Thank you for your comment and me too!
Blessings
you make life hopeful,
well done.,
Thank you so much for saying so! That’s one of the main purposes that I started this blog – to give hope. God has been so good to me and I just want to give something back to others! Peace, love and blessings
What a beautiful message you share with this wonderful poem. It blesses me.
Here is my week 8 story: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/amber-waves-of-grain/
Thank you Charles! You've blessed me back. I truly enjoyed your offering as well. I left you a comment there too. Peace and love
A charming story, I loved it
Thanks! I’m so glad that you liked it. Blessings
an angelic piece of writing
Jenni, Thanks for the compliment! I truly appreciate it. Blessings
This is charming and sincerity shines through ! Thank you for blessing us with this poem !
Thank you so much! And you are most welcome too.
Blessings
Very nice write:) I loved how it flowed:)
Thank you L! I love angels, can you tell?! I know that my Guardians have taken good care of me, praise God
I enjoyed your positive take–like a slice of (what else) angel food cake
I am truly glad you liked it and guess what? Angel food cake is my favorite!!
stunning poetry, you rock.
keep it up.
Thank you very much! Happy you think so.
Blessings
elegant and hopeful…
Thank you very much! I don’t think that I have received any comments using the word elegant yet, I appreciate it! Peace