Who Are You?
Who are you
husband or friend?
Does it matter
in the end?
Are you spouse
or soul mate?
Either way’s fine
I won’t debate
Who do I
tell secrets to?
Well my dear
it’s only you
Who holds me
when I cry?
Who knows when
I don’t try?
Who’s the one
that sees me
for what I am
and can be?
Who loves me
just the way
that I am
on any day?
I can make
no good excuse
for my past
there’s no use
But the present’s
yours and mine
may our lives
be forever entwined
I love you Mark
’til death does part
what no man could
right from the start!
Teresa Marie 11/18/11
http://gooseberrygoespoetic.blogspot.com/2011/11/poetry-picnic-week-14-what-im-thankful.html
Posted on November 18, 2011, in Free Write Fridays, Gooseberry Gardens Picnic, Poems and tagged Confidant, Friendship, Love, Marriage, Poetry, Relationships, Romance, Soul Mate. Bookmark the permalink. 18 Comments.
I can make
no good excuse
for my past
there’s no use
that is my favorite part and so very true! why waste time making excuses? I love your entry and I was so excited to see it pop up! Been having a slow down with participation lately
So thanks soooooooo much!!!!
Kellie
ps… if you dont mind, maybe you could tweet it to your followers, maybe get some people to join in?
Thanks Kellie!! And you are sooo welcome too, lol. I love doing it – especially when Mark is the muse, that makes it easy. Love that man
blessings, Terri
This is a wonderful descriptive poem. I enjoyed the revelations in every word.
Thanks for sharing it with us.
Isadora
Thanks Izzy and you are most welcome!
Blessings…
The strength of the bond so evident…my husband is my best friend also…lovely poem
Thank You Susie! It’s the greatest way to be, isn’t it? Blessings…
The second last stanza is my favourite. Congrats on your award, Terrie. You deserve it!
Thanks Tariisai to both! Blessings…
this is precious,
love the way you express your emotions.
best.
Thanks! It’s easy when you have a great muse, lol! Blessings, Terri
passionate love, well said.
Thanks Morning! I think you all know very well by now how I feel about my husband, lol!! PLB, Terri
Terri, this is just beautiful. I don’t know how many years you’ve been married, but if you should decide to renew your vows, read this! xoXox
Thanks Kay, that is an excellent idea too!! We’ve been married 6 years and together for 7 but it feels like forever, lol in a good way! blessings, Terri xoxo
Heartfelt – I agree with Kay, you should use this for a renewal ceremony!
Thanks for the compliment and I agree too, told Mark that this morning
Blessings…
Beautiful
be blessed
Thanks!
and you too!!!