I have waited and waited
down here by the sea
for your ship to come in
darling, where can you be?
As my tears fall softly
they mix with the rain
did your ship wreck
and are you in pain?
Thoughts of our passionate
nights of love-making
run through my head
yet my heart is breaking
I look to the horizon
but my effort’s in vain
though your ship’s not there
with all hope I remain
My darling, my husband
where can you be?
Forever will I wait
for you by the sea.
Teresa Marie 8/16/11
Poetry Potluck Week 48 Entry
What about God? 
love it.
Thanks Jingle! Blessings xoxo
Beautiful sentiment, written wonderfully!
Here is my offering for Potluck 48: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/14/the-lake/
Thank you Charles! I read The Lake and thought it was beautifully done. I left you a comment. Blessings 🙂
elegant,
you are talented.
🙂
bless you.
Thanks you for the compliment! I’m so happy that you that you liked my take on the picture. It is a wallpaper that I found online and I knew there was a poem in it as soon as I saw it. Peace and blessings, Terri
one of the better ones I have read so far. great flow and images… very nice
Thank you so much! Your kind words have truly blessed me. I am honored! Blessings, Terri
holy amazing!!!!!!! I am so glad I read this tonight… this is now my favorite from Thursday’s pot luck! this is beautiful!
Thank you very much! I am truly honored that you think so highly of my poem. You’ve blessed me and brought a smile to my heart. 🙂 God bless you!