Adam and Eve, were first in all
First human beings
that God created
Ever to live
and be appreciated
The first couple
to make love
Ever to walk
with God above
The first having
a child born
Ever to drink
from plenty’s horn
The first to let
temptation win
Ever to then
commit a sin
Yes, Adam and Eve
were the first in all
The first that did
from God’s grace fall!
Teresa Marie 8/21/11
Gooseberry Garden Picnic Week 1 First Offering
What about God? 
reminds me of the song “all in all’ due to the rhymes here that I enjoyed 🙂
Here’s my offering: http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/08/21/vanished/
Thanks for your comment and I wll check your post out asap and leave you my thoughts as well. I’m glad you enjoyed it! Blessings 🙂
Very well done! A nice poem on the first couple.
Here is my offering for this first Gooseberry Garden picnic: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/21/this-eden/
Thank you Charles! I’ll be checking yours out in a few minutes. Peace 🙂
A lovely poem ! It was very pleasant to read. Thank u for sharing this
Take a look at my blog =)
Thanks you for the compliment and yes I will check it out asap. Also, you are welcome! Peace 🙂
you make a fact so fun and cool,
well done.
Happy Poetry Picnic!
🙂
Thanks so much for the kudos! Happy Poetry Picnic to you too! 🙂
magnificent piece.
your poetry is delightful to read.
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Kitty, I am truly humbled, thank you so much. You have just made my day, and I needed that today! Bless you, Terri
a lot of your poems are on similar lines of adam and eve..can i ask why? lovely poems though im just curious 🙂
Arjun, They are my offerings to a poetry site that I belong to called Gooseberry Garden Picnic. They give you the theme and you submit 1 – 3 poems to go with it. That’s why you have seen 3 poems on Adam and Eve. Thanks for asking! Be blessed 🙂
the beginning of the life…that God has breath into man and created the woman…
Amen! Peace 🙂
The first of many and those apples keep on tempting us anew.
Amen, don’t they though?! Suppose that some day we will learn our lesson?, lol. Thanks for you comment. Blessings 🙂
the first in everything- couldnt agree more haha! keep it up and glad to be of acquaintance thru gooseberry!
Thank you very much! It’s nice to meet you too. I will be visiting you very soon to further our acquaintance, lol. Peace and blessings 🙂