Hey darlin’ let’s play a game
first let’s change our name
You be Adam, I’ll be Eve
I’ve got something up my sleeve
Here is how we will play
you gotta follow what I say
We’re both still virgins, let’s pretend
first night together that we spend
Passionate kisses and fumbling fingers
the tingle on my skin lingers
The heated groping way too fast
don’t know how to make it last
On the grass we lay spent
say making love is heaven-sent
In the morning, God we tell
we think this life’s pretty swell!
Teresa Marie 8/22/11
Gooseberry Garden Picnic Week 1 offering #2
again you amaze me Teresa..you write such beautifully romantic and spiritual poems..:-)
Thanks Aby! It is sometimes hard to do both, romantic and spiritual, in one poem but I like to try 🙂 I’m glad you liked it! hugs
apt words.
well done.
This one was fun to write! Thanks for the compliment. Peace 🙂
awww I had my fingers snapping to the inner rhythm and beat, nice work. I totally love yur background, real cool!! 🙂
My offering is here: http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/08/19/fragment-of-yesteryear/
Lynn, Thanks! My husband got a kick out of it and it gave my eldest a much needed laugh for her stressed out evening. So I guess with your comment that puts me 3 for 3 this evening on my fun filled fancy there, lol. Glad you liked liked it. Peace 🙂
loved it 🙂
This one was fun! I like to do that once in a while, show a bit of humor. Peace 🙂