Tourists crowded the space like a herd of cattle. I set up my easel and exposed my paints to the scene before me. Together we would create a masterpiece landscape. I raised the quivering tip of my paintbrush to the blank canvas but a tremor threw me out of my chair. My easel fell to the ground like a wounded animal, bleeding paint. Another tremor disturbed the ground. I suddenly registered that people were screaming. The rush of footsteps created a sinister murmur. This couldn’t be happening, I thought,the volcano is dormant. I was frozen to the spot. People bustled me to the side. Those who didn’t get up were trampled. The screaming halted for a moment. A deafening roar exploded from the picturesque landscape.
– Ermisenda Alvarez
And hell erupted on earth
rising up from the core
Spewing it’s vilest poison
lapping tongue of a whore
Forked in demonic nature
ragged horns jutted forth
Ashes up from the pit
foul winds blowing them north
The screams all around me
were nothing to even compare
To the anguish I heard
crying for me to beware
As the multi-headed dragon
from within the lava arose
While there came a great wailing
as a mother in birth-pain throws
Beside it were a thousand demons
whose putrid stench filled the air
Vomited out of the pit
with Armageddon to declare
Then I woke up gagging
nostrils holding the smell
From that most frightening scene
of the world’s coming hell
“Dear God, dear God, dear God,”
I then began to pray
“Leave me not behind
to face that Judgement Day!
But rather my dear God
this I beg of Thee
If You would only allow
that ‘chosen’ I would be!”
Teresa Marie 1/28/12 ©
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Wow wow wow…keep writing please, this is very good!
I had the ‘end’ on my mind the other day: http://altarofheaven.wordpress.com/2012/01/19/begin-with-the-end-in-mind/
Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. I shall be over soon to see your post as well 🙂 God bless, Terri
Haha, dark much this week, Terri? “a mother in birth-pain throes” I love this description for a volcano! I bet you could probably put the whole book of Revelation to rhyme if I gave you a day! 🙂 Another good job!
Thanks Anne!! LOL, I don’t know, Revelations may take me a while 🙂 Mark thought that was pretty funny too. Be over to see yours probably tomorrow. hugs, Terri
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Hey Terri! The first four stanzas were mind-blowing. Fantastic imagery! I wish I came up with those metaphors and descriptions. Awesome work again. Thanks for contributing to Picture it & write this week!
Thanks so much for the inspiration to write it 🙂 too! You know I love doing these each week!! smiles, Terri
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That was excellent time and rhyme work!
Good on you! 🙂 I like it. Very well described.
Happy Sunday, Terri! Peace, UT
thank you so much for the compliment!! Glad that you enjoyed it ) Happy Sunday Keith!!
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Nice tension throughout drew me on as if I were watching a film.
I do have an itsy bitsy question though…when you wrote:
“But rather my dear God
this I beg of hee”
…am I in need of an explanation for the word “hee” or perhaps it’s just that a “T” ‘s gone missing and this word might just be “Thee”?
LOL, thanks for pointing that out!! I don’t know how spell check missed that one – you are absolutely right though, it’s Thee. Glad that you enjoyed the poem. smiles, Terri
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That felt very real and scary. Great write.
Thanks Michael!! I’m glad you liked it. It scared me too, lol. smiles, Terri
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what a scene! terrifying! what a prayer!!! may it be answered! 🙂
Thanks Lynn! my prayer for you as well!! I can’t imagine it, or I guess I just did, didn’t I 🙂 Don’t want to see it though. xoxo
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Wow, the language is so strong in this one; reflects very well the chaos of the volcano’s eruption!
Thanks Eliza! I appreciate the comments. smiles, Terri
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haunting, powerful imagery.
🙂
Thanks Summer for your comment! smiles, Terri
Great write !
Thank you so much! I appreciate the compliment. smiles, Terri
Vivid, passionate, and powerful! Very well done, Terri!
Thanks Charlie!! I wanted to give an impact 🙂 Guess it worked, huh? lol blessings, Terri
impressive,
you never fail.
cheers.
Thanks Taylor!! I finished the draft for Friday too, by the way, if you want to check it out 🙂 hugs, Terri