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With the snow coming down
and mounting on the ground
a package to be found
by the whomever came around
And so it was there
that the mother polar bear
did stop at it to stare
to wonder why and where
From which it did appear
for there were none near
in the silence ever clear
as at it she did peer
The decision then was made
like a child in an arcade
great joy by her displayed
for the gift at her nose laid
So she saw was fit
for her to open it
and what a surprise did get
with all her eyes then met
Santa had brought her meat
oh what a wonderous treat
for her children to eat
in their first Christmas feast!!
Teresa Marie 12/18/11 ©
http://gooseberrygoespoetic.blogspot.com/2011/12/poetry-picnic-week-18-snow-december.html
Nice flow and rhyme sequence! You seem to draw the reader with its candid simplicity:)
Thank you Vishwas!! I am so happy that you enjoyed it 🙂 Blessings, Terri
This is really cute! And wow – the rhyming is great. http://www.benjity.wordpress.com
Thank you so much!! What you wrote on your blog is amazing, direct and beautifully done. I loved it!! blessings, Terri
Hehe, cute!
lol, thanks!! Blessings, Terri
This is great, Terri! I really enjoyed it!
Maria
thanks Maria!!! Hugs and love, Terri
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Such sweet fun! Thank you 🙂 Merry Christmas, Teri. xo
Thanks Janice!! and the Merriest Christmas to you as well!! xo
What a Christmas wonder! Happy holidays, Terri! May you be blessed with your own special gift this year.
Thanks Kay!! And may you and yours have the Merriest of Christmas as well! Hugs~ Terri
hi mom great post. just wanted to let u know im taking a break from writing. ive cleared all my exams and ill be sailing shortly. maybe in feb. i dunno these days i dont feel like writing. havnt written anything in a week i guess. im trying new things. ive taken up cooking, and ill resume playing sports that i was once good at. im very very fickle minded and i guess im just bored of writing. but i wanted to thank you for all the support uve provided me all along.thank you sooo very much terri. ill visit ur blog for sure. ill keep in touch. take care 🙂 love son.
thank you, my dear, for letting me know what was up ’cause you know me and I would have been worried 🙂 And you are so very welcome, it truly is my pleasure to have adopted you into my little “cyber” fold of children!! Be sure to let me know how you are from time to time!! Love mom
This would be a perfect little tale to illustrate and present as a beautiful children’s book. Not that we adults don’t also enjoy it. I certainly did.
Larry
Thanks Larry!! I wrote it with my grandchildren in mind – but then again, for me as well, lol! Blessings, Terri
Cute poem and pic, Terri. Made me smile!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/18/this-christmas/
Thanks Charlie! Yours is awesome and the message of your gifting is simply beautiful!! Blessings, Terri
Hey Terri, just wanted to let you know that you are a Preliminary Nominee for The Dark Globe Outstanding Artist Awards Writer of the Year Award, as Nominated by Abichica… In the end, there will only be 5 Final Nominees in each of the 3 Categories, which will be determined on December 20th… If you make the Final 5 Best Writer of the Year cut, Voting for the actual Awards will begin December 21st through December 31st… And the Award Winners will be Announced on January 1st… To see your actual Nomination,and for the Official Rules, you can go here http://thedarkglobe.wordpress.com/2011/12/13/the-dark-globe-outstanding-artist-awards/#comment-281
Gratz, and if you make the Final Cut, Good Luck! Either way, Kudos for being Nominated
DarkJade
Editor/Creator/and one of the many Writers of The Dark Globe
DarkJade, Thank you so much for the heads up and I have left my nominations there as well!! I am humbled to have been included by my “cyber” daughter, miss Abi!! She is dear loved and appreciated 🙂 Blessings, Terri
so amazing how you tell this story with such talent! very great poem!!! 🙂
L- Thank you so much!!! I’m happy that you enjoyed it, truly! Hugs, Terri
Congratulations on your nomination, Super Girl! It’s neat that the announcement came on this popular and fun post!
Love and blessings,
M.
Thanks Maria! It was an appropriate post, wasn’t it, lol! Though I may not win it, I am honored that Abi nominated, bless her heart. and bless yours too!!! Love, Terri
love it,
fun and playful.
Thanks Summer!! Glad that you liked it 🙂 Blessings and Merry Christmas, Terri