Oft’ do I find
a cliche’ in mind
When sitting to write
of my latest plight
Trying not to go
where you already know
Rather bring something new
over which to chew
But it’s never easy
whether in-depth or breezy
A message getting across
without suffering a loss
Of the point made
to not soon fade
Yet in a cliche’ mind
it often stays I find!
Teresa Marie 11/28/11
Week 57:
http://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/
im now convinced that u can turn anything into a poem. great stuff mommy 🙂
Thank you son! 🙂 XO PLB
🙂 nice work!!!
Lynn, Thanks so much! 🙂
Lovely piece! 🙂
Thank you Elyas!! I appreciate the compliment 🙂 Blessings, Terri
Always a challenge to get a point across in the most effective, palatable way. A unique poem, well done. Enjoyed!
William
Thanks William! Blessings, Terri
Ha-ha, love this! Darn cliches!
Thanks so much! Blessings, Terri
Oops, here’s mine. . .http://pamanner.wordpress.com/2011/11/30/oneirologist/
Pamela, I loved your poem and left you a comment there! 🙂
you rock.
mind blowing.
🙂 thanks for the smile you just gave me! Blessings, Terri
Yep! Been there, done that! Nice one, Terri!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/11/30/the-beast-2/
Thanks Charlie! Yours was great and very amusing too 🙂 !!
Proliferating poem..though it ends but it still is stretching in my mind..Nice work 🙂
and i just love the image you chose to compliment with it!
Alcina-In need of me-2
Thanks so much for the kind words! I got that picture from dreamworlds.ru, they have some great stuff there 🙂 Blessings, Terri
masterful wording,
way too cool.
🙂
Thanks Miss Kitty!! I appreciate it very much. 😀
You described the aversion to cliches really well. This is a well-thought out piece of work.
Thanks Jenni! I appreciate the compliment. Blessings, Terri
without cliches there would be no country music…just sayin’. Nicely written.
lol! You do have a point, Charlie. I still use them too but try to steer clear as much as possible. Blessings, Terri
In a world of reused words, you have reused them very well
Thanks Sherrie! I appreciate the compliment. Blessings, Terri
Brilliant 🙂 I think that’s something we all face
Thanks so much! And Amen to that 🙂 Blessing, Terri